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Set the scene, a quiet beach,
The sound of crashing waves,
Sit sending distant memories,
To fading darkest graves,

He loves me, he loves me not,
Petals dancing in the breeze,
Counting off people lost,
I watch the swirling seas,

One was first a dreamer,
Two was but a dream,
Three taught me a lesson,
Things are not as they seem,

Four was the beginning,
That never had an end,
Five was a lover,
Six was just a friend,

Seven had a smile.
Eight was always sad,
Nine acted as if true,
Though was just a fad,

Ten will see the end of it,
Ten will be the last,
Ten will be my future,
Where I leave a fading past,

I cast away from one to nine,
I slowly forget faces,
Leave them sinking in the sea,
Away from fond hearts places.
©2007-2009 ~justaLITTLEbitter
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eh, kinda lame.
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aww i love this i love this its the best way to go i want to print this out so i can show my friends may i please ?
thanks hun :)
sure you can, you're a sweetheart

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Then the actress too good for the play,
Spoke the line she'd been dying to say,
"Use your head, seek what's not too far away."
thanks u but your a great poet i love your work im printin it as we speak
aww :hug:

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Then the actress too good for the play,
Spoke the line she'd been dying to say,
"Use your head, seek what's not too far away."
i got it here in my hand i love it man im so showing my friends :D just wait and see what tyler says what she says is true no dowt
I think it's pretty rad ^^

are the numbers actually people?

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La seule raison que je sais pour bourdonner, est que vous êtes une abeille.
La seule raison que je sais pour être une abeille, fait le miel.
Et la seule raison que je sais pour faire le miel, est ainsi je peux le manger! - Pooh
mhmm
not really in order, though.
That would be slightly creepy.

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Then the actress too good for the play,
Spoke the line she'd been dying to say,
"Use your head, seek what's not too far away."
:)

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Then the actress too good for the play,
Spoke the line she'd been dying to say,
"Use your head, seek what's not too far away."
:giggle: can u right a really cool poem for me please i mite need it for school yet :giggle:

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