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Again. by ~justaLITTLEbitter:iconjustaLITTLEbitter:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Fixed


Oh, I’ve got that sinking feeling,
Here we go again,
We try to make a good thing better,
And only make it end,
Oh, I’ve got that creeping feeling,
Crawling through my head,
We try to make a good thing better,
And only make it end.
©2008-2009 ~justaLITTLEbitter
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Ah, this was going to be longer but I think it works better this way.
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=Schecter-Omen:iconSchecter-Omen: May 15, 2008, 2:47:29 AM
Short, to the point and well structured. Love it :love:

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"You know who is gonna inherit the earth? Arms Dealers. Because everyone else is too busy killing each other"
=NeoPiter:iconNeoPiter: May 15, 2008, 2:55:07 AM
Might be a good song chorus :D

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"None of you understand. I'm not locked up in here with you. You're locked up in here with me..."
~justaLITTLEbitter:iconjustaLITTLEbitter: May 15, 2008, 3:01:02 AM
Cheers :)

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Then the actress too good for the play,
Spoke the line she'd been dying to say,
"Use your head, seek what's not too far away."
~justaLITTLEbitter:iconjustaLITTLEbitter: May 15, 2008, 3:01:13 AM
I thought so too :P
Cheers

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Then the actress too good for the play,
Spoke the line she'd been dying to say,
"Use your head, seek what's not too far away."
=NeoPiter:iconNeoPiter: May 15, 2008, 3:07:17 AM
Hmmm gonna grab the guitar then ?

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"None of you understand. I'm not locked up in here with you. You're locked up in here with me..."
~da-panda-bear:iconda-panda-bear: May 15, 2008, 3:12:11 AM
I think it's best that you didn't make it any longer, so it ends abruptly as stated. (inferring that it's good)

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La seule raison que je sais pour bourdonner, est que vous êtes une abeille.
La seule raison que je sais pour être une abeille, fait le miel.
Et la seule raison que je sais pour faire le miel, est ainsi je peux le manger! - Pooh
~justaLITTLEbitter:iconjustaLITTLEbitter: May 15, 2008, 3:22:44 AM
:P mebbe

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Then the actress too good for the play,
Spoke the line she'd been dying to say,
"Use your head, seek what's not too far away."
~justaLITTLEbitter:iconjustaLITTLEbitter: May 15, 2008, 3:23:45 AM
Cheers :)
Agreed.

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Then the actress too good for the play,
Spoke the line she'd been dying to say,
"Use your head, seek what's not too far away."
=NeoPiter:iconNeoPiter: May 15, 2008, 3:34:26 AM
i'll do the riffs :P

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"None of you understand. I'm not locked up in here with you. You're locked up in here with me..."
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